(P.S. my name is Melissa since I forgot to start with that...)
(P.S.S. I realized AFTER I recorded it that in my head, I defined creationism as the creation of artwork, etc. so it could be very confusing if you didn't know that)
IOC Rubric:
Knowledge and Understanding of Extract or Work- 8
I think I did a good job of explaining the novel and then context of the passage as well. My references to the text were all relevant to my points.
Understanding of the use and effects of literary features- 5
I think that my understanding of the effect of literary features was generally valid and had supporting evidence. I got sidetracked on a couple of my points and forgot where I was going with the point which seriously detracted from how effectively able to convey my argument.
Organization- 4
I felt that my examples and "paragraphs" had a good overall structure. I got a bit lost a few times and had to trace back to the structure but overall I felt that it was fairly organized.
Language- 3
I said "um" and "like" a lot, but when I started to focus on not using filler words I forgot what I was talking about. This eventually led me to give that hope up at least for now. I also talked in a stream of consciousness sort of way which was sometimes difficult to follow.
Planning:
